【緩募】英語のプロフィール添削

　マレーシアの知人から新しいSNSの招待状が届く。
　SNSとはソーシャルネットワーク（Social Network Service）の略。
　要するに、mixiやTwitter、Facebookの類である。
　「Linked in」という、このサービスは、ネット上で必要なスキルを持っている人たちを探して、プロジェクトのメンバーとして仕事をオファーしたり、新たな仕事を求める人たちの履歴書＆ハローワーク的な要素を兼ね備えたものだ。
　マレーシアの凄腕DJ、Syazleey Zalsyamから招待してもらったはいいものの、今のところLinked inは英語での運営。
　そこで、ジーニアス英和辞典とGoogle翻訳を駆使しつつ、適当な英語スキルで自分のプロフィールをつづってみた。
　日本語プロフィールを元に訳したわけではないので、原文はないのだが、知人の皆さん、文法、表現、その他、「これはなくね？」というものありましたら、教えてください。
　よろしくお願いいたしますm(__)m。
以下、原文ママ。
Wataru Kobayashi
Owner at AISA Co.,Ltd.
◆Summary
I started playing trumpet at age 13 and playing Shakuhachi japanese bamboo flute at Sankyoku Kenkyukai,playing Shakuhachi, Koto, Shamisen, Takiko and some japanese music instrumental club in Senshu Univ.
Then, I could understand what western music is good and oriental music is too.
When I graduated from Senshu Univ., I interested in Japanese tradition. so I worked in Nihonsakari Co., Ltd. Japanese SAKE maker. Sake has at least over 1300years of history.
I came back to music for making music score and books in western and oriental music in 2000.
I had edited about 200 music score books and didactic book for any musical instruments.　For example Piano, Guitar, Bass, Drums, Keyboard, Ukulele, Trumpet, Chorus, Band, Brass Band, Shakuhachi, Koto, Shamisen and Sanshin at Doremi Music Publishing Co.. Ltd.,
I left the company and established AISA Co., Ltd. in 29th Oct. 2004.
I have been editing over 300 music score books, text book for learning play music instrumental and another kind of books for example Trekking mountain, golf, PC, Cooking, and Shrine.
I also have planned several events and concert.
I supported inviting Malaysian R&B singer Reshmonu from Malaysia to perform on Tokyo Asian Music Market(TAMM) show and invited Malaysian instrumental duo Mohram from Malaysia supported by Ministry of Culture, Arts and Heritage Malaysia, held a concert called “Mohram in Japan” in 2005.
I also supported inviting Malaysian DJ group STYLUSTICS from Malaysia to perform on Tokyo Asian Music Market(TAMM) show in 2006.
Recently I have interviewed, written and edited NHK text books.
“Start again! playing folk guitar with Takahiko Ishikawa”
“Let’s play piano from just a single finger playing style with Takashi Obara”
“Mensore! Introduction of Sanshin(Okinawa Shamisen) with Sadao China”
“Ni Hao! Let’s play Erhu with Chen Min”
“Aim! Rock guitarist”
“Playing Chopin for beginner with Ikuyo Nakamichi”
“HIDEBOH’s TAP DANCE with Hisako Manda”
(NHK Books)
◆Specialties
Writing for CM, Magazine, Book and E-book
Editing for Magazine, Book, E-book and DVD
Shooting
Score analyzing
Event planning,
Shodo Sakai Shakuhachi Concert “The Roots of Shakuhachi” I planned won best prize of playing on Arts Festival Award sponsored by Agency for Cultural Affairs in Japan in 2008.
I wrote “Musical Grammar Book” on Shinko Music Entertainment Co., Ltd.
◆Experience
Owner
AISA Co.,Ltd.
Writing and Editing industry
October 2004 – Present (6 years 5 months)
We are editing for any books.
It’s not only music books but also other kind books for example golf, mountain, game, school Information, pc, shrine…etc.
We can edit for DVD also.
So, We are trying to edit and to make E-books.
Editor
Doremi Music Publishing Co., Ltd.
Publishing industry
February 2000 – October 2004 (4 years 9 months)
I was edtitng about 200 music score books and didactic books of music instruments.
Salesman
Nihonsakari Co., Ltd.
Wine and Spirits industry
April 1996 – February 2000 (3 years 11 months)
I was selling Sake.
I was responsible for wholesaler and retail in Osaka.
◆Education
Senshu University
Economics
1992 – 1996
Activities and Societies: Sankyoku (Shakuhachi)